What do you think about this song?

SephZero · Sep 17th 2012, 7:38pm

I'm learning to use FL Studio and i composed a little song about Pewdiepie. What do you think?

(It is the first song i ever made, don't be mean...)

soundcloud.com/sephzero/pewdiepie

Riivalzz · Sep 17th 2012, 8:12pm

Like Nugeddi said, not bad for a first song. You've got potential Seph.

SephZero · Sep 17th 2012, 8:31pm

You've got potential Seph.

Thanks

I'm trying different sounds, and composed another track, enough for today.

soundcloud.com/sephzero/test001

Riivalzz · Sep 17th 2012, 9:11pm

SephZero wrote:

You've got potential Seph.

Thanks
I'm trying different sounds, and composed another track, enough for today.

soundcloud.com/sephzero/test001

Me Gusta!

Cawkav · Sep 17th 2012, 9:17pm

It's pretty cool though, would be much better if it would be longer!

Riivalzz · Sep 17th 2012, 9:20pm

Cawkav wrote:

It's pretty cool though, would be much better if it would be longer!

Obviously this is just a demo. Also it's his first song. I'm pretty sure he will make full length songs as well

TheMiinuko · Sep 17th 2012, 9:21pm

The second one reminds me so much of Final Fantasy (x

peachvomit · Sep 17th 2012, 9:21pm

~~I can't get the silly thing to play... :(~~

Nevermind. It worked on another browser. Pretty nice! :thumbsup:

It has some sharp sounds which aren't for my personal taste but that's cool.

SephZero · Sep 17th 2012, 9:51pm

Cawkav wrote:

It's pretty cool though, would be much better if it would be longer!

I'm still learning how to use FL Studio and putting together some ideas. Maybe i will do a longer version

marcusmo17 · Sep 17th 2012, 9:53pm

That 1st track was good, especially towards the end. Nice work bro

Kneesocks · Sep 17th 2012, 9:58pm

Not bad for a first try. might be more improved on the flow part.

SephZero · Sep 18th 2012, 1:04pm

Kneesocks wrote:

Not bad for a first try. might be more improved on the flow part.

Yep i want to do a full song and i need to improve a lot. I changed a bit the first track (some notes...), what do you think?

soundcloud.com/sephzero/pewdiepie-song-test002

PewPiggeh · Sep 18th 2012, 1:22pm

Music isn't really your thing, eh? I don't like the noises in the song...soz

Eldelbarrio1 · Sep 18th 2012, 1:52pm

SephZero wrote:

Kneesocks wrote:

Not bad for a first try. might be more improved on the flow part.

Yep i want to do a full song and i need to improve a lot. I changed a bit the first track (some notes...), what do you think?

soundcloud.com/sephzero/pewdiepie-song-test002

The first one was a little better, but both are good. Keep up the good work.

sillysoul · Sep 18th 2012, 11:41pm

I actually like the beginning a lot, it sounds kinda epic if you ask me

You should definitely keep on trying different sounds and stuff (dunno much about making music...) and continue making this song.

SephZero · Sep 20th 2012, 6:30pm

sillysoul wrote:

I actually like the beginning a lot, it sounds kinda epic if you ask me You should definitely keep on trying different sounds and stuff (dunno much about making music...) and continue making this song.

Yea i'm trying a lot of differents sounds. The last one i uploaded: soundcloud.com/sephzero/newproject
One day i will be able to do a full song :thumbsup:

Pi3rRick · Sep 20th 2012, 6:39pm

Not bad at all ! :O

PhaZe · Sep 20th 2012, 7:00pm

It wasnt bad for a first song

phrfunmusic · Sep 20th 2012, 7:11pm

I think its a little bit funny

RunescapeHullFanatic · Sep 20th 2012, 7:31pm

I definitely see potential in your work! Especially Test003, but I'm interested... what kind of style are you going for exactly?
Any specific genre? or are you re-writing history?

haha

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