Forsaken Souls - My First Custom Story

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  • Forsaken Souls - My First Custom Story

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    Name: Forsaken Souls
    Engine: HPL Level Editor
    Creator: Nervly
    Date of creation: 19/06/2012 - 15:23:27
    Release Date: DEMO - 08/08/2012 | Full Version - In development
    Genre: Horror


    History

    After the infection, caused by an Antidote that would resurrect the dead, Edward got to Crab Hill to make a delivery.
    He was a Trucker. As he entered the town, he noticed the lack of people in it. Like a Ghost Town, which it actually turned into.
    He then sees a man, which strangely had a red glow in his eyes.
    Edward decides to ask him where the whole town was, and the answer he got, was an attack from the sick man with a couple of more "sick men".
    Zombies, to be more exact. He dodges the bite, and unarmed, runs like he never did into a dead end.
    When he sees where he got, he turns around and the zombies attack him once again.
    Edward wakes up in a weird dark room, and wants to figure out why didn't he turn into a zombie.
    Find out why playing!

    Screenshots



    Download

    Forsaken Souls DEMO:

    (25/06/2013)
    I'll continue developing the custom story :)

    Special Thanks to:
    PewDiePie - Inspired me to make this Custom Story!
    Cruzore/FastHunteR - From Frictional Games forum, helped me alot with scripting!
    Frictional Games - For creating this awesome game with this awesome Custom Story feature!
    You - For, hopefully, downloading and reading this!



    The post was edited 15 times, last by Nervly ().

  • It was pretty nice. Although you should improve your scares a bit, the only part where I jumped was
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    You might also want to add some ambients, even if you're looking for the silent, abandoned style you'd rather want a really quiet and calm ambience then, and perhaps make it dead silent in some parts, letting the player know something is about to happen (builds up tension).
    Other than that it was pretty good :)

    The post was edited 1 time, last by PhaZe ().

  • PhaZe wrote:

    It was pretty nice. Although you should improve your scares a bit, the only part where I jumped was
    Display Spoiler

    You might also want to add some ambients, even if you're looking for the silent, abandoned style you'd rather want a really quiet and calm ambience then, and perhaps make it dead silent in some parts, letting the player know something is about to happen (builds up tension).
    Other than that it was pretty good :)
    You found out how to get out of the first room :D
    Thanks for the feedback, there are some not so scary scares, I have to agree with you, so I'll try to improve them as you said ^^
    Also, about the ambience you talked about, it sounds really nice, so I'll do it in the full version.
    Im glad to know you liked it :)

    EDIT:
    Can you remove the spoiler btw? Im sure there are many people that will see it anyway :s

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Nervly ().

  • Nervly wrote:

    PhaZe wrote:

    It was pretty nice. Although you should improve your scares a bit, the only part where I jumped was
    Display Spoiler

    You might also want to add some ambients, even if you're looking for the silent, abandoned style you'd rather want a really quiet and calm ambience then, and perhaps make it dead silent in some parts, letting the player know something is about to happen (builds up tension).
    Other than that it was pretty good :)
    You found out how to get out of the first room :D
    Thanks for the feedback, there are some not so scary scares, I have to agree with you, so I'll try to improve them as you said ^^
    Also, about the ambience you talked about, it sounds really nice, so I'll do it in the full version.
    Im glad to know you liked it :)

    EDIT:
    Can you remove the spoiler btw? Im sure there are many people that will see it anyway :s

    You're very welcome ^^ And I removed it.

  • PhaZe wrote:

    Nervly wrote:

    PhaZe wrote:

    It was pretty nice. Although you should improve your scares a bit, the only part where I jumped was
    Display Spoiler

    You might also want to add some ambients, even if you're looking for the silent, abandoned style you'd rather want a really quiet and calm ambience then, and perhaps make it dead silent in some parts, letting the player know something is about to happen (builds up tension).
    Other than that it was pretty good :)
    You found out how to get out of the first room :D
    Thanks for the feedback, there are some not so scary scares, I have to agree with you, so I'll try to improve them as you said ^^
    Also, about the ambience you talked about, it sounds really nice, so I'll do it in the full version.
    Im glad to know you liked it :)

    EDIT:
    Can you remove the spoiler btw? Im sure there are many people that will see it anyway :s

    You're very welcome ^^ And I removed it.
    Thank you :)

    The post was edited 2 times, last by Nervly ().

  • Hey Nervly. I am about to download your custom story and later on I will tell you how it was probably later on edit this post. But now heading in to amnesia! :)

    Well yea I just played it and I just wanna say that it was quite amazing! One thing I don't like is that you give way too much stuff it kinda ruins it if you wanna have a scary moment not much oil left and almost dead :P. And Lack of music it needs it to create some atmosphere. Without the music I really like the atmosphere but some music would do good :P. The thing I liked the most were the jumpscares! We get into action really quickly so it's really cool. Embarrassing to be screaming in the house when other people around but yea I loved it. Can't wait for the full version and then I'll do a let's play! :) If you need more detailed info just ask :P
    Amnesia Custom Stories , Home, Dead Space, Amnesia: Machine for pigs. :love:
    Silly/Weird/Scary Moments Montage!
    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T56PqxhzkqM&list=UU2_yBml3EPqXV3ml_TmFQhA&index=1[/youtube]

    Silly/Weird/Scary Moments Montage #2
    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kd9_kZGf-3s[/youtube]

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Naikey: I played the custom story :) ().

  • Naikey wrote:

    Hey Nervly. I am about to download your custom story and later on I will tell you how it was probably later on edit this post. But now heading in to amnesia! :)

    Well yea I just played it and I just wanna say that it was quite amazing! One thing I don't like is that you give way too much stuff it kinda ruins it if you wanna have a scary moment not much oil left and almost dead :P. And Lack of music it needs it to create some atmosphere. Without the music I really like the atmosphere but some music would do good :P. The thing I liked the most were the jumpscares! We get into action really quickly so it's really cool. Embarrassing to be screaming in the house when other people around but yea I loved it. Can't wait for the full version and then I'll do a let's play! :) If you need more detailed info just ask :P
    Thanks for the feedback :D
    Yeah, I also noticed that I gae too much resources, I'll fix that in the full version.
    About the music, PhaZe stated the same, and I'll add music. :)
    I think it will be better with it aswell.
    I tried to start soft with the jumpscares, they will get more intense along the gameplay.
    Im glad you liked it :D

    Can't wait to see the let's play! :)

  • Naikey wrote:

    Can't wait to see the let's play when pewdie does it! :D
    I hope he really does! :D
    Even being the DEMO, I want him to do it because of the scares already in it :)

    If I ever go on YouTube, click on his name to see the newest videos, and I read: Forsaken Souls
    I will be like: OMFG! :"D

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Nervly: I wrote "in" instead of "on" ().

  • HurriKanessi wrote:

    Hey! Do you need music for your mod? Cuz i can help ya ;)
    Hey! Sure, Forsaken Souls would love to have its own music, thanks for the disponibility :D

    Br00tal wrote:


    Mega_hyp3rrr_808 wrote:

    It was pretty nice, but yeah you should improve the scares a little
    MORE JUMPSCARES
    Pewdie hates no action, then give him non-stop action instead.

    I shall improve them jumpscares then!!!
    Thanks :D

    The post was edited 2 times, last by Nervly ().