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    • I need your feedback

      Hey guys,

      My name is Max, 16 and I'm making Let's Plays... so I need your feedback! I don't have the best Mic and shit, and poorly, I have no Cam. But I'll try to get one.

      I'm playing Horror-Games like many others but... I need to know what I should do better. So please check out a few Videos and tell me how you like them, and what you don't like.

      I was working really hard on everything so please... don't flame or anything.


      That was pretty much it. Here you can find my Channel: youtube.com/user/xLePlay


      Thanks :)


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      Oh yea... please leave your feedback here and not in the comments at youtube. ^^

      The post was edited 1 time, last by xLePlay ().

    • xLePlay wrote:

      Hey guys,

      My name is Max, 16 and I'm making Let's Plays... so I need your feedback! I don't have the best Mic and shit, and poorly, I have no Cam. But I'll try to get one.

      I'm playing Horror-Games like many others but... I need to know what I should do better. So please check out a few Videos and tell me how you like them, and what you don't like.

      I was working really hard on everything so please... don't flame or anything.


      That was pretty much it. Here you can find my Channel: youtube.com/user/xLePlay


      Thanks :)
      good work man!!!!
      keep the Broskyness! :thumbsup:
      Olle dole doff kinke lane koff koffe lane binke bane ole dole doff

    • xLePlay wrote:

      Serpentor wrote:

      give me some time to see all videos ok?
      i suscribe too!!!!!

      Thanks for that, bro :D

      xLePlay wrote:

      Serpentor wrote:

      give me some time to see all videos ok?
      i suscribe too!!!!!

      Thanks for that, bro :D
      i know we all love Pew...
      but...
      try to be original...
      find a way to attract people with somthing...
      humor, music, editing your own videos...do somthing normal...
      OR SUPER WEIRD!!!...
      but keep it original...
      hard job i know...
      but you'll make it
      i thrust you keep the dolphiness in your heart!!!

      (thats not original but ...I DON'T CARE!!!)

      SERIUSLY you can Do it
      nice voice by the way
      (super gay comment doen't?hahasha)

      C-you around!!!!!

      feel like a friend of you!!!


      i'll be watching!!!!!
      Olle dole doff kinke lane koff koffe lane binke bane ole dole doff

    • Serpentor wrote:

      xLePlay wrote:


      i know we all love Pew...
      but...
      try to be original...
      find a way to attract people with somthing...
      humor, music, editing your own videos...do somthing normal...
      OR SUPER WEIRD!!!...
      but keep it original...
      hard job i know...
      but you'll make it
      i thrust you keep the dolphiness in your heart!!!

      (thats not original but ...I DON'T CARE!!!)

      SERIUSLY you can Do it
      nice voice by the way
      (super gay comment doen't?hahasha)

      C-you around!!!!!

      feel like a friend of you!!!


      i'll be watching!!!!!
      Of course I try to be myelf... and thats what I'm doing. I don't know if you noticed references to PewDie, but I don't hope so. Of course he super awesome... and I don't want to be a copy of any one.

      So thanks for the feedback :)

      I'm currently rendering 2 new Videos... Amnesia - Heart of Evil Part 3, and a really special one... SCP-087-Prince of Bel-Air WTF xD

      make sure you don't miss that xd

    • Well, like others have said, your voice is not annoying or anything. Try your best to talk more clearly and more often - you don't want mumbling or awkward pauses of silence.

      As for the videos themselves, they're good quality but I noticed at some points in your Amnesia LP that it was rather dark; maybe just increase the brightness by a little. Other than that, it's fine.

      Hope this helps, bro!

    • Dark wrote:

      Well, like others have said, your voice is not annoying or anything. Try your best to talk more clearly and more often - you don't want mumbling or awkward pauses of silence.

      As for the videos themselves, they're good quality but I noticed at some points in your Amnesia LP that it was rather dark; maybe just increase the brightness by a little. Other than that, it's fine.

      Hope this helps, bro!
      Oh yea, sure it helps.

      I'm trying my best to speak clear and stuff... but sometimes I just dunno what to say :D
      Just keep in mind that I'm only at the beginning... I have to get into it, but I'm sure I'll get better.

      Thanks for your feedback :thumbsup: