I'm testing the waters to see if I'm good enough to make a decent playthrough of a game. I would really appreciate it if you bros could tell me how I'm doing or give me tips on how to improve. Thanks!

And of course there is swearing in the videos so if that isn't your thing...

Part 1 UPDATED WITH INTRO, SWEET: youtube.com/watch?v=9SLqwWIcfnc

Best parts IMO are at: 5:00-6:40, 7:20-7:50, 11:15-12:20, and 14:53-15:50

Part 2: youtube.com/watch?v=xUGFHG0AlZk

Best parts 2:25-2:35, 4:55-5:09, and 8:50-10:55

Thanks for even considering to view them! *brofist

Yeah I messed up the editing on the first video for that intro of nothing. Takes like 40 minutes to render so I decided to just pass on cutting out 10 seconds. I won't anymore though. Do you think I should do something with like graphics, theme, etc or what?

What do you guys think about this? It's a crappy dos game I have. youtube.com/watch?v=phayV0vH2pc

Any criticism is good criticism. Keep it coming, yo.