Poetry Corner

I can't write poetry for shit, nor will I try because i WILL make a fool of myself. These are all so good! ¬.¬

Oh well. May aswell post something that seems like a bit like poem to me (It's actually a song)

Deep in the ocean, dead and cast away
Where innocence in burned in flames
A million miles from home, I'm walking ahead
Frozen to the bones
I am
A soldier on my own, I don't know the way
I'm riding up the heights of shame
I'm waiting for the call, the hand on the chest
I'm ready for the fight and fate

The sound of iron shocks is stuck in my head
The thunder of the drums dictates
The rhythm of the falls the number of deaths
The rising of the horns ahead
From the dawn of time till the end of days
I will have to run away
I want to feel the pain and the bitter tast of the blood on my lips again

The steady burst of snow is burning my hands
I'm frozen to the bones
I am,
A million miles from home
I'm walking away
I can't remind your eyes, your face

If you recognise it it's because it's the song used for the Assassins Creed Revelations trailer.

C:

Bleeding inside
never came to be someone outside
A artificial human that don't trust
A machine,a ghost from the past
Pain and agony are better than misery
Although shattered i can't stand
Life itself is a true mystery
And in the end i can just make a symphony

"I wish you could see
all these things you’ve done to me.

you’ve forced gravel into my mouth
you’ve watched me crawl into your arms
you’ve laughed as I added various lacerations
you’ve kissed my cheek when you were proud.

you were everything I loved
you made me see everything differently
including you.

I would smile everyday
parading with it
boasting about it
as though a trophy.
You would chuckle at it
that would make my days...

I rarely smile now..."

not done yet

The natures cried....
Yet the man still lied...
The natures yield...
Yet the man stil build...
The natures passed....
Still, the man continued to build....
In her carcass...

Damn you all, you guys are making me sad and jealous because I can't do poetry ;-;

EDIT: The first one is too damn depressing.

You was my precious little gift
Given by the angels itself
You continued the rift
Giggling
When i was joking
Rambling
When i was lying
And crying
When i was dying

*still waiting for feedback not that I want any cough cough lol wtf*

I'll Stump you whenever i want >:)
Anyway, lets read a classic one.

She Walks in Beauty
by Lord Byron

She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meets in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress
Or softly lightens o'er her face,
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

And on that cheek and o'er that brow
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,—
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent.

Oops, shit. Double post. Different days, fuck it.
Anyway, more well-mixed-lyrics-song. With the vedeuh!

From the mists of the mountains a deafening call
Bellows down over the plains
On a host of battle-worn ears it does fall
Pushing out through the thunder and rain

These men of the north they have suffered too long
The anger it swells in their veins
Of the spirited roars of lost warriors' songs
Distant echoes are all that remain

And my voice is my violence
Clear the sky's frozen tears
And no more we'll be silent
With this Sovngarde song in our ears

And we stand tall
Sons of the snow
We will not fall
Under these blows
For our hearts they are hardy
Our spirits are strong
And our voices are lifted into
This Sovngarde song

Conquer the anger and ravenous rage!
Make it a part of your power
Pummeling down let your bloodlust engage!
Under your force they will cower

Feeling the fury so pure and so bright
Breaking the bonds of surrender
Under the moon for our home we will fight
And we will die to defend her

And my voice is my violence
Clear the sky's frozen tears
And no more we'll be silent
With this Sovngarde song in our ears

And we stand tall
Sons of the snow
We will not fall
Under these blows
For our hearts they are hardy
Our spirits are strong
And our voices are lifted into
This Sovngarde song

These perilous peaks
On the rim of the sky
I move in the midst
Of the clouds drifting by
At the top of the world
On a white doomful day
Men of wisdom will show me the way

And we stand tall
Sons of the snow
We will not fall
Under these blows
For our hearts they are hardy
Our spirits are strong
And our voices are lifted into
This Sovngarde song

It had hate,it had love
Love and hate are not the same
Still the "chosen ones" use love to justify war
Glory for the ones which loves or which hates?
Humans always lying about everything
Complaining why them suffer wrath of nature
Companining why demons come to curse their lives
This is not hate or love,this is hypocrisy
But without lies the man that can't reach the truth can still be alive?

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Sorry for the english i'm not good at grammar(even from my own country xD)
I don't always make with ryhm i think i like to write the "raw" thoughts that lives in my mind sometimes
They were kids thats i once knew
They know are stranges in another world
They will be enemys in the war?
They will be allies in the Victory?
They will...I will be myself?
I will became the monster that one day i was scared of?
I'm that alone,that even the most scare monster i faced was nothing
Will i fall into nothingness more and more deeper,dying without even fighting?
Some days in the deep black of my soul i fell like a thunder,making scars for the rest of my life
Some days this thunder only make me see a light,that without even seeing was gone
I believe that thunder is like the life of this world,like a stream that someday will grant me a enlightment
This light might be my dear love,my dear darling that was always so fragile,that i want to protect
My darling always try to be strong but never came to realize that she was scared,even of me
But i might be a monster in this deep black of souls,and my darling is the angel that cry for me
Until i live on,one day i will become not more this monster that once scared myself
But something that can be together with my dear love that even in the deepest black light my days
Because some words might be the only way i can tell i love you,but in the end i just trying to kill myself
I have a dead heart,but even if i'm trying to kill my self,i will turn to ashes someday and say i love you
Even thought that you leave me a untold pain i just can't leave you behind without saying i already always for you.

Rose are red
Violet is blue
A face like you
Belongs to the zoo

"I wish you could see
all these things you've done to me.

you've forced gravel into my mouth
you've watched me crawl into your arms
you've laughed as I added various lacerations
you've kissed my cheek when you were proud.

you were everything I loved
you made me see everything differently
including you.

I would smile everyday
parading with it
boasting about it
as though a trophy.
You would chuckle at it
that would make my days...

I rarely smile now
encaged in the black box
left to ponder
if I'll ever escape.
you used to let in light in the box
you've sealed that hole since I last remember
no amount of hours I dedicate to mourning the light
will ever bring it back.

no words from my vocabulary
can create a speech
to change your mind
the only choice I have:
Rebellion.

I'm weak by everything I say to your face
none of it wants to be meant,
but that's no longer my choice
"you get what you give" they said
that's what you'll get from giving me.

if I can't be myself around you
you deserve the artifical me
if I can't smile
you get my anger
no love
all anger."

any good?