Cons:
1. I would shorten your intro to 5 seconds, 10 seconds is a bit long for an intro that doesn't move
2. Your jokes seem really fragmented, they don't roll together, and it seems like you are going "Oh crap, gotta make a joke here, better think of something" Most good youtubers make jokes that they honestly "Click" with the joke I guess. They don't go "Gotta make a joke here" they go "Ooh! I can make a joke out of that!" and thats how they remain funny, because it is a genuine joke.. If that makes sense
3. If your gonna do a lets play, HAVE the gameplay story in there, thats why people want to watch lets plays, to see what the story is about. This video really has no context in it for me because theres no actual game audio and you don't see anything much of the solo campaign gameplay. If you plan on doing videos like this, do it in multiplayer.
Pros:
1. Great mic quality
2. Great video quality
Sorry if I seem too harsh, this is just my opinion and you don't have to take my opinion or anything, its just what I honestly think as a lets play watcher
1. I would shorten your intro to 5 seconds, 10 seconds is a bit long for an intro that doesn't move
2. Your jokes seem really fragmented, they don't roll together, and it seems like you are going "Oh crap, gotta make a joke here, better think of something" Most good youtubers make jokes that they honestly "Click" with the joke I guess. They don't go "Gotta make a joke here" they go "Ooh! I can make a joke out of that!" and thats how they remain funny, because it is a genuine joke.. If that makes sense
3. If your gonna do a lets play, HAVE the gameplay story in there, thats why people want to watch lets plays, to see what the story is about. This video really has no context in it for me because theres no actual game audio and you don't see anything much of the solo campaign gameplay. If you plan on doing videos like this, do it in multiplayer.
Pros:
1. Great mic quality
2. Great video quality
Sorry if I seem too harsh, this is just my opinion and you don't have to take my opinion or anything, its just what I honestly think as a lets play watcher
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YT Channel: TanikasMisadventures
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YT Channel: TanikasMisadventures
- YouTube