Kahisys wrote:

Alright, here are my observations :

1. When you create a map and upload it, you have to at least build a little spawn and empty the inventory before saving and uploading, it's more "professional". Yours is a bit too small and not very well made. Also, when we open your map we spawn over the pig race instead of your spawn. Go there, save and re-upload.
2. The piggy race : good idea, looks fun to play but it's not really well organized, it's a bit confusing to see where to start.
3. The bow duel target : very well made and fun, but making it explode in the end makes the game only playable once, which is bad.
4. The pac-man game is a very good idea, really.
5. The sand survival plateform is very good, but we see the redstone circuits, which is bad.

Here is now what I advice you to do :

1. Make a scenery around, don't build random mini-games separatly : make an amusement park for example! A map needs to be worked on a lot.
2. Be sure you games can be played multiple times. When you play a mini-game that you like, you're more likely to want to play it several times. When building mini-games, you must think so anyone can play it endlessly, or long enough to make it seem endless.
3. Instead of setting spawns with beds, use command blocks. Same goes with giving stuff before the maze. The more you automatize your mini-games with redstone and command blocks, the more enjoyable it'll be.
4. Build around your mini-games, so we don't see the redstone circuits.
5. Make it accessible for Adventure mode only : this is the only gamemode worthy for mini-game maps, which implies an access on every game without flying (stairs or teleportation, the latter being better) and no digging.
6. Add more mini-games, there are never enough of them.
7. Fix your spawn, and possibly make it better.