I'd like to have it critiqued! I'm fairly new to this, and I'd love to have a piece of advice on how to make better videos the next time! Just leave a comment either on the video itself or here about your opinions on it... For longer replies, I suggest writing them down here. Mainly because of the word limit. xP
youtube.com/watch?v=62qv9NtCCT8
youtube.com/watch?v=62qv9NtCCT8