well hello bros i invented this character in my head and an entire intro kinda thing for him and i was wondering
could you please tell me what you think of it
i am gonna make more characters
and possibly even a whole storyline to a game or book or anime or somthing
i would be really honoured if you could check it out

oh and a warning before you read the grammar may be bad, and the story might not be still may understandable


pastebin.com/qyXnqU1t <--- unitauros the sorrow eater

and please comment what you think please i like seeing where i need to improve