I just want some feedback for these two videos here (the last episodes from two games)

I want feedback on (and how to improve if possible):

- Interactiveness
- Me talking, or other things about me
- Length of video (to long, to short)
- Quality of video (high enough quality)
- What to do to get more views/subs
- General impression

These are the vids:

Dishonored - Episode 2
Lone Survivor - Episode 11

Thank you for taking time for this

*bump*

Cmon, nobody wanna do a bro a favor :'(?