Another little poem for pewdie!

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    • Another little poem for pewdie!

      Sup, you may have read my first poem so you know who am I. If you see me the first time check this Little poem for PewDie

      My last poem didnt get noticed much. I want pewdie to notice this very much. He was my inspiration few times and this is one of the times I cant hold the lines in my head. Enjoy.

      "
      Brotherhood of One. The path to Narnia. Part I

      Resolute, origianlity knocks
      Open the door, brother
      This sir has made many stops,
      From Sweden, Italy or another.

      He gathered brothers from every edge
      Trust worthy society of his lead
      Humour is his victory badge
      That no one can defeat.

      Takes a breath, then a step
      Progessing with people behind
      Fighting his fear inside, yep.
      While enemies co-operate to blind.

      Behold, the legends sing evil
      Felix, brother, fastern the legs
      I hear the devil
      He wont give you time for begs.
      Mount the horse, escape the unwanted wreck.
      To the ships!

      ***

      Sword, unknown blood, we are ahead.
      Armour, fallen men, looking dead.
      Ships, empire's flag, horses... left unfed.
      Castle, ambience, orchestra named ''dread''.

      As Felix falls on knees in devastation
      Sun lets the Moon play,
      Felt by the atomsphere manipulation,
      Destroyed by the look of the bay.

      In misery, he takes the sand
      Dropping it, catching with hand.
      Noticing the blood on his armour, screaming
      Looking, wishing.... and dreaming.
      "



      Not much, but hey, still an ok poem I think.
      Part II will be wrote if you guys like this one. Hope you enjoyed it.