I don't think it's bad but it needs work. You need to talk more and you're mic quality isn't that great so you should try to fix that too. Hope you do well.
I am making a fast paced game where you are Pewdiepie running and avoiding obstacles. (A game like Jetpack Joyride.) I need ideas on how to incorporate characters. I have already used: - Stephano - Coins. - Barrels - Obstacle that roll toward you and you have to jump over it. - Chopnese Sword - The weapon you use. - Chair Mode - Avoid Enemies for 10 seconds. - Bro Fists - Lives. - Jennifer - Get's thrown at you and you have to destroy it with your sword. - Martin (Green mummy that hangs from the…