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    • emoteddylion wrote:

      Is there a particular reason for using eye instead of "I"? Also, have the feeling you want to rise up above the ranks of others. Very nice either way...don't become a dictator please ^^ (kidding)




      Know your meme wrote:


      Nine-ball, Maru-Kyu, or ⑨ is Cirno’s nickname.[17] Cirno has been considered stupid, and sometimes called “baka” (バカ, idiot, moron, fool) instead of her name. On the Phantasmagoria of Flower View manual, Cirno is labeled “9. Moron” in the explanation of the game layout. Hence, ⑨, or simply the number 9, has been associated with “baka” and Cirno.


      Nuff said xD

    • well.. I would post one but my best ones are directed to someone, and its only meant for that one person xD so I need to write some that arent about that person :3 oh wait.. I have,

      Heres one I wrote when I was happy :3333

      Silence

      All Alone in the dark with nothingness
      all you can hear is silence and the rain
      silent enough to drive a man insane
      but can you really expect any less?

      Sitting in the dark, thinking all alone
      your thoughts carry a certain kind of tone
      its not your voice, its that of someone sad
      it tells you things that could be considered bad

      You grab the knife and prepare to cut
      afraid of blood so you keep your eyes shut
      open them and sit there as the blood runs
      "Oh god, oh god, what is this I have done?"

      Silence is something this author has never had
      but now that boy will, without a dad

      I have others but I will post them later
      Signature not included

    • TimmyCr4ft wrote:



      Silence

      All Alone in the dark with nothingness
      all you can hear is silence and the rain
      silent enough to drive a man insane
      but can you really expect any less?

      Sitting in the dark, thinking all alone
      your thoughts carry a certain kind of tone
      its not your voice, its that of someone sad
      it tells you things that could be considered bad

      You grab the knife and prepare to cut
      afraid of blood so you keep your eyes shut
      open them and sit there as the blood runs
      "Oh god, oh god, what is this I have done?"

      Silence is something this author has never had
      but now that boy will, without a dad


      First reaction was, "This is a happy poem?" But, I'm glad I know the difference. After reading it once or twice over..it could be considered as such comparatively. You obviously have a feeling for the flow of words, more important then a rhyme scheme, yet you did that as well. This is narrative as well, you not only did you express emotion, but you told a story. It's more than most people try and do. Adding actual speaking text, also impressive. Only one question, did the person kill their father, or did the father leave them and they were doing self harm?
      Boobs Bacon

    • Few things I hate:

      I hate humans,
      'Cause I always find one, who crosses the limits of idiocism.
      I hate winter
      'Cause the snow reminds me of human soul:
      At first white and pristine
      And then black and dirty.
      I hate spring
      For it's joyfulness
      I hate summer
      For the heat, that kills me.
      I hate autumn
      Which still reminds me of upcoming death
      I hate mornings,
      'Cause every new day is as painful as the previuos one.

      I hate
      When someone is stupid.
      I hate
      When someone is better than me.
      I hate
      When someone can't appreciate my efford.
      I hate
      When I'm alone.
      I hate
      Being with the others.
      I hate
      Doing something that makes no sense.
      I hate
      When I'm jealous.
      I hate
      When someone's trying to prove their point.
      I hate
      When someone's stubborningly trying to convince me about something which is objectively ridicoulus.
      I hate
      My fight with the world.
      I hate
      Being helpless.


      But most of all
      I hate myself.

    • Addictive_Placebo wrote:

      Few things I hate:

      I hate humans,
      'Cause I always find one, who crosses the limits of idiocism.
      I hate winter
      'Cause the snow reminds me of human soul:
      At first white and pristine
      And then black and dirty.
      I hate spring
      For it's joyfulness
      I hate summer
      For the heat, that kills me.
      I hate autumn
      Which still reminds me of upcoming death
      I hate mornings,
      'Cause every new day is as painful as the previuos one.

      I hate
      When someone is stupid.
      I hate
      When someone is better than me.
      I hate
      When someone can't appreciate my efford.
      I hate
      When I'm alone.
      I hate
      Being with the others.
      I hate
      Doing something that makes no sense.
      I hate
      When I'm jealous.
      I hate
      When someone's trying to prove their point.
      I hate
      When someone's stubborningly trying to convince me about something which is objectively ridicoulus.
      I hate
      My fight with the world.
      I hate
      Being helpless.


      But most of all
      I hate myself.
      ;( thas beautifulest thing efa, you deserve a cookie... but I eated it ._.


      this guy gets my life, and if you're plagiarizing I will stab you in the dick =_=
      Signature not included

    • Well, i posted this one on the blog section but.. meh :V
      As the plague spread upon the land
      the overseer sleep in a place so grand
      When the whale started to exhale
      some mens laugh with a cup of ale
      forget the past they say
      decieves the rust i say
      Deep in the shadows
      lurks a man with a set of crossbow
      The one who've met the outlander
      the one who's act as a defender
      a wound means nothing
      Revenge solve everything...

      If you're angry, don't break anybody's heart, they only have one..... Break their bones, they have 206 of them

    • dragonlord7132 wrote:

      Well, i posted this one on the blog section but.. meh :V
      As the plague spread upon the land
      the overseer sleep in a place so grand
      When the whale started to exhale
      some mens laugh with a cup of ale
      forget the past they say
      decieves the rust i say
      Deep in the shadows
      lurks a man with a set of crossbow
      The one who've met the outlander
      the one who's act as a defender
      a wound means nothing
      Revenge solve everything...

      hmmm Dishonored?
      Either way, it's beautiful and it is true in the way of society. Plague or no plague, this is how things work.
      grammatical errors in there, but honestly I suck at grammar too so I'm not even going to mess with it ^^

      Oh and Timmy, thanks for offering feedback to others. You're the first, and hopefully not the last.
      Boobs Bacon

    • I found a poem from my files. Fak u, k.

      "How long can you walk
      in those broken shoes
      with all that agony
      with all that pain
      such heavy steps
      day after day, again
      the ground is warm
      and your feet are cold
      lay down my friend
      embrace the warmth
      you always think of it
      you always wonder
      press your face, hands
      into the dirt, warmth
      lay down my friend
      nobody will ever know
      if you fell or not"


      /wristwristemofak

    • peachvomit wrote:

      I found a poem from my files. Fak u, k.

      "How long can you walk
      in those broken shoes
      with all that agony
      with all that pain
      such heavy steps
      day after day, again
      the ground is warm
      and your feet are cold
      lay down my friend
      embrace the warmth
      you always think of it
      you always wonder
      press your face, hands
      into the dirt, warmth
      lay down my friend
      nobody will ever know
      if you fell or not"


      /wristwristemofak

      Maybe it's because I feel your words hitting my own personal story, or you're really just a good writer, but I was thoroughly impressed. I read it again and again, making sure I thought through it. This is beautiful..it's full of emotion, it's full of the pain people feel and can feel connected to. Thank you for letting me read this.
      Boobs Bacon

    • emoteddylion wrote:

      peachvomit wrote:

      I found a poem from my files. Fak u, k.

      "How long can you walk
      in those broken shoes
      with all that agony
      with all that pain
      such heavy steps
      day after day, again
      the ground is warm
      and your feet are cold
      lay down my friend
      embrace the warmth
      you always think of it
      you always wonder
      press your face, hands
      into the dirt, warmth
      lay down my friend
      nobody will ever know
      if you fell or not"


      /wristwristemofak

      Maybe it's because I feel your words hitting my own personal story, or you're really just a good writer, but I was thoroughly impressed. I read it again and again, making sure I thought through it. This is beautiful..it's full of emotion, it's full of the pain people feel and can feel connected to. Thank you for letting me read this.
      Thanks. I guess. I pretty much have stacks of poetry from over the years... most is in Finnish tho'.

      Anyway, sorry about always saying it's all emo and shit :P You know? I just feel embarrassed.

    • I wrote this the day after my ex broke up with me...;_;

      Never

      Never again to see your face,

      To feel your touch, your warm embrace.

      Never again to hold you tight,

      To talk to you all through the night.

      Never again to listen to your heartbeat,

      To hear your voice, gentle and sweet.

      Never again to play with your hair,

      To know that you would always be there.

      Never again to feel you beside me,

      To know that we were meant to be.

      Never again to lay next to you,

      To you, my love...I bid you adieu.
      I'm gonna be a blitzball when I grow up! :D

    • Tinyleaf wrote:

      I wrote this the day after my ex broke up with me...;_;

      Never

      Never again to see your face,

      To feel your touch, your warm embrace.

      Never again to hold you tight,

      To talk to you all through the night.

      Never again to listen to your heartbeat,

      To hear your voice, gentle and sweet.

      Never again to play with your hair,

      To know that you would always be there.

      Never again to feel you beside me,

      To know that we were meant to be.

      Never again to lay next to you,

      To you, my love...I bid you adieu.

      to everyone who read this...they will remember...just as i remember.
      I can't find a single flaw in anything...it's perfect.
      It conveys exactly what it is suppose to. Thank you.
      Boobs Bacon

    • Ugh. I was digging my entire Livejournal and found some stuff from 2001-2006. I gotta say I've come a pretttttty long way from these days. To be honest I'm surprised how I'm even alive.

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      "My heart is full of so many dreams
      My head is full of millions of screams
      I don't know how long this all shall last
      But nothing is never left to rot in the past
      There's a blurred vision behind my eyes
      And they say there is so many different ways
      I'd sell my soul for a just little moment
      If I'd get this all out and mind again closed"


      And this one is from 2001-2002, I used to be very ill all the time... reading this again really hurts my feels. I really used to live day by day, always thinking there's that ONE way out if nothing else works. But I guess I survived.

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      "It looks good in the morning,
      It doesn't hurt,
      And you feel fine.
      But when the night arrives,
      It starts to burn,
      You are facing it again.
      Life.
      You think, "one more day"
      And with that you manage to go on,
      With the fact that it maybe will be over soon.
      Next evening you think, "It wasn't so bad"
      But then in a sigh it's night again,
      And you must face the fact,
      You lied to yourself.
      But still, "one more day"
      You decide to go on!
      Think about others, the ones that loves you.
      But can they take it, suffer for you?
      No.
      And does their words help you?
      No.
      Life.
      You want to live it,
      But it wont let you live.
      Not without pain, not without suffering.
      Just think how soon it would be over.
      How soon you could sleep,
      No pain, no suffering.
      But still for some reason
      You keep thinking,
      "one more day"


      I have NO fucking idea what this next one is about even I wrote it.......and to be honest it freaks me out.

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      "I see the eye dripping stuff on my floor
      STOP THAT YOU FUCKER STOP IN THE NAME OF <3
      my neurotic mom just cleaned it yesterday
      licked the floor, dried it up with the cat
      cleaning makes my kidneys hurt and sting
      I'd take, I did - I will take anyway
      you want to kill the eye look at it now
      just throw it in the fucking freeway
      DRIVE OFF THE HIGHWAY TO HELL TOMORROW
      what the fuck do you expect me to bring?!
      the eyes grow at the mall you know that
      all laughing and dripping shit on the floor
      and I keep tripping over but you know what
      YOU HAVE THE EYE AROUND YOUR FAT NECK
      the eye the eye the eye the eye the eye
      the eye drips and lies about your soul
      it's not sold I swear I promise, my eye
      drive over your God at the freeway
      strangle your fat neck with a politician tie
      eyes never lie I heard that just now
      what else could the victim do than die?
      sleep on the slime of your own eye
      on the floor clean like the mothers womb
      have YOU ever seen a baby pidgeon?"


      Next one... hah. I really loved her.

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      "I never think you'd do it
      Crush my heart into pieces
      Look at me like I was gone
      Pretend you don't understand
      Say it will be fine, promised
      Torture, still nothing you do
      Agony, still you don't touch
      I remember you just fine
      Wishing I'd forget someday
      So wishing you didn't know
      How much I loved you."


      Someone's been angry...

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      "Carve your eyes out
      Put them on a stick
      Turn to look back
      At yourself, look!
      You didn't care once
      Now you do, sure
      Cut your ears off
      Don't listen to it
      Write down the truth
      Quickly so you remember
      Stab your tongue now
      Don't ever say it again
      Stop screaming why me
      Break your legs too
      Lay on the ground
      Where you seem to belong
      Don't get attempted
      Rid of those hands too
      You didn't care once
      Now you do, wonder why
      Stab your heart next
      Stop feeling it already
      Stop thinking why me
      Shoot your brains out"


      Mmh. Another one.

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      "When you have nowhere to turn
      Strangle your own heart with pain
      See the white lights of blind rage
      Wonder is this even the right planet
      You need to do what you desire for
      Run with the unknown confusion
      Start to vanish when it gets hard
      The road from death and despair
      Wonder if it's any better to go
      See the white lights of blind rage
      And kill your love with one shot
      Death to despair and right choices
      When there is no left or right
      Just the way to blinding desire
      Behind you hear the easy despair
      You need to do what you desire for
      Close your eyes and go."


      More.

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      "Once we all have dreams
      Mine are already dead
      Gone to the others
      Minds better than mine
      I once had them I swear
      Thoughts and plans
      Waiting for the future
      But now it's all dead
      Gone to the others
      I'm slipping away fast
      Soon I will fall
      So it won't matter
      We all have dreams
      Some just never come"


      lol. Yeah. You asked for this.

    • emoteddylion wrote:

      Tinyleaf wrote:

      I wrote this the day after my ex broke up with me...;_;

      Never

      Never again to see your face,

      To feel your touch, your warm embrace.

      Never again to hold you tight,

      To talk to you all through the night.

      Never again to listen to your heartbeat,

      To hear your voice, gentle and sweet.

      Never again to play with your hair,

      To know that you would always be there.

      Never again to feel you beside me,

      To know that we were meant to be.

      Never again to lay next to you,

      To you, my love...I bid you adieu.

      to everyone who read this...they will remember...just as i remember.
      I can't find a single flaw in anything...it's perfect.
      It conveys exactly what it is suppose to. Thank you.



      :') Thanks. That means a lot to hear that. I write all my best stuff when I'm depressed. Like this little gem that I wrote while I was having a mental meltdown...

      Breaking
      I'm breaking.

      Even the strongest have limits;

      mine was reached long ago.

      Clinging to the precipice between sanity and insanity

      by my very fingertips,

      I dangle over an ocean of uncertainty,

      perpetually questioning everything I thought I knew,

      pointlessly awaiting my prince to come and save me.



      I'm slipping.

      Please don't let me fall.

      Take my hand, set me on my feet,

      save me from myself.

      Tell me all will be well, it's all just a nightmare,

      and I will wake up safe in your arms.

      Be the light in my darkest hour.

      Be the Virgil to my Dante.



      I'm broken.

      Will you be the one to fix me?

      Be my saving grace?

      Save me from this hell?

      Please, before it's too late.

      Before I lose my grip.

      Before I fall into eternal blackness,

      Before I'm lost forever.
      I'm gonna be a blitzball when I grow up! :D

    • Once upon a midnight dreary
      While i porn surfed, weak and weary
      Over many a strange and spurious site of 'Hot chicks galore'
      While i clicked my favorite bookmark
      Suddenly there came a warning
      And my heart was filled with mourning
      Mourning for my dear amour

      'Tis not possible! I pleased
      But my browser so conceited
      Remained blank I then repeated
      Just a blank and nothing more

      With a scream I was defeated
      For my cookies were deleted
      So i begged no longer seated
      Give me back my free hardcore

      Then in answer to my query
      Through the net i loved so dearly
      Came its answer dark and dreary
      Quoth the server, 404.......
      I wanna cut you open, and see your colors run
      I wanna play, I wanna have a friend to have some fun
      Don't be afraid,don't cry, just give in
      This is the last time I'll see you again
      So come, relax, and sit still
      You belong to me and you will
      Keep quiet and look me in the eye,
      Cause I wanna cut you, wanna cut, while you f**king die....

    • Colgate wrote:

      Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water...
      Jack fell down the well and drowned and Jill ran home soon after....
      Jacks body started to rot after a couple of days and contaminated the water...
      Which caused everyone in town to die..
      And everyone thought it was a slaughter...

      I heard that in school the other day.. o.o
      ______________________________________________

    • Well, this isn't a poem. A song in a matter of fact. But the word is well mixed so.. I'll share it here.

      Distant honor, wasted grace
      Twisted pawn a face replaced
      Phantom filter mask of dread
      Damn the guilt my past is dead

      Cause the sad sad faces of the weary and worn
      Live in bad bad places that are dreary and torn
      And a distant honor calls me to your side
      To be your guide

      Wrapped up in your velvet sheets
      Far above the hellish streets
      you're Strapped inside your wealthy keeps
      Piss on corners where we sleep

      And this town's paranoid
      Blinking and jumping
      Down in the void
      A sickening dumping
      Ground to avoid
      The stink of the pumping
      Plague in all your hearts

      If you're angry, don't break anybody's heart, they only have one..... Break their bones, they have 206 of them

    • dragonlord7132 wrote:

      Well, this isn't a poem. A song in a matter of fact. But the word is well mixed so.. I'll share it here.

      Distant honor, wasted grace
      Twisted pawn a face replaced
      Phantom filter mask of dread
      Damn the guilt my past is dead

      Cause the sad sad faces of the weary and worn
      Live in bad bad places that are dreary and torn
      And a distant honor calls me to your side
      To be your guide

      Wrapped up in your velvet sheets
      Far above the hellish streets
      you're Strapped inside your wealthy keeps
      Piss on corners where we sleep

      And this town's paranoid
      Blinking and jumping
      Down in the void
      A sickening dumping
      Ground to avoid
      The stink of the pumping
      Plague in all your hearts

      I can see where it could be argued for both, though the more I read it the more I want to try and find the music to go along with it to make it match perfectly. Makes me want to go find someone who is rich and make them live on the streets for a week and see if they could live that way. >.> I'm really starting to love how all of these tie into games though. It's a first for me to see that kind of thing and I'm liking it more and more each time :3
      Boobs Bacon